Winged Kitsune's Creative Creations!

[Winged Kitsune]

Hello everyone!!! ^_^

I have decided to claim my own thread in this section as a place to store and displace my various works of literary arts.

I don't know how many of you appreciate the wonderful world of words, but I hope that my works will still invoke a sense of powerful emotions to everyone who reads them. ^_^

I will update this thread with new works as often as I finish them. For now, the first begins with another perspective poem in the same vain as my entry for the last contest, except this one will be dedicated to SonicBoom. ^_^


A Mother's Tears

Some say the greatest thing you can ever own,
Is something material that you can touch and hold,
Money, belongings, a wonderful big home,
But I disagree, I think those people are cold.

I believe the greatest joy anyone can ever feel,
Is to have a baby to call your own, a precious child.
To see them before you very eyes, the feeling is so real,
It expands your whole being, a feeling so far from mild.

I was once held as a beloved wife,
But my love was taken by a terrible wizard,
And I felt as though I had lost my whole life,
But there was one thing that kept me pillared.

Before he was taken I was given a blessing,
I was made a mother to three dear children,
And it made my heart's hurt, far less pressing,
For we had thought myself to be forever barren.

Three beautiful chicks I was given to love,
For me to teach and to watch grow old,
To me they were beyond precious, a gift from above.
But sadly for us, the story was far from told.

The evil wizard whom had killed my other half,
Had tracked us down for more of our magic,
But to protect my chicks I fought him and his evil staff,
And in the end I had triumphed, yet it was tragic.

The wicked man retreated with haste,
But not before he left a curse on us all,
Forever he said my chicks would be disgraced,
For forever more they are cursed to be small.

Time passed after he left, and to my horror I saw,
Something that completely broke my heart,
He had cursed my babies, the three I so very adore,
To be forever separate from me and forever apart.

I couldn't believe it was such a terrible curse,
For each time my babies grew,
They would be to suffer times reverse,
And be placed into there eggs anew.

Tear's left my eyes as my babies were made,
Into endless cycles to simply be reborn,
And to this day there life is delayed,
For all my babies I heartfelt morn.

A mother's pride is her babies happiness,
But how can mine ever see such a light?
When they are forced to suffer such accursedness.
I pray each day for an end to this plight.

But each day my prayers are unanswered remain,
For they hatch and return,no end ever showing,
And my heart breaks each time, with unending pain.
For my babies have no way of every growing.

I see other mother's and my heart fills with sorrow,
Please just tell me why... why is it so?
Please take this pain away, this unending hollow,
Just tell me why... why I am not allowed to see my babies grow?...



I must say I can empathize with SonicBoom in a sense... and so no matter how many times I rewrite this simple poem I just can't seem to capture the feelings I want to portray for her... her story makes me so sad... TT_TT

Anyway what did you all think? I will be posting more soon, so watch this thread however often you wish. ^_^

(oh! Just in case anyone missed it, this poem is ABAB. )

[Winged Kitsune]

Oh! I should probably tell you all that I'm open to commissions. ^_^ And for any member of this forum it will be free of charge. ^_^

I can write short-stories, any type of poem, short songs, sonnets, and most other types of literature. If anyone wants me to write them a piece for there favourite character or another character in Skylands just place a message here with what character, what literature type, and what you want it to be about! ^_^ I will post back as soon as I can here or through pm about how long it will take me to do. And as with all commissions, the works will be personallised to the requester.

See you all with more works soon! ^_^

[Radical Tropicon]

Love the new poem Kitsune! it's very tragic and very sad, but it made me feel, doin commend you for that! Poor Sonic Boom

[Winged Kitsune]

I'm glad it was able to make you feel hun. ^_^ I do enjoy to hear that my works can do that. I hope you enjoy all of my coming poems too! ^_^

[graz73]

How about a Flameslinger poem??

[Winged Kitsune]

I am the fastest, the quickest, the best,
My arrows the swiftest, my skills blessed.
I was the greatest archer in all the land,
My eyes the keenest my aim truly grand.

I've shon in battles, in displays, in shows,
And with each draw my skill does grow.
Challenges mean nothing for I win them all,
None can beat me, none have the gall.

But there arise does present the problem,
I long to prove myself , my skills and my awesome.
But there is no-one, not one up to the task,
Is really a challenge of my skill to much to ask?

So to lower my level and give other a chance,
And to show my skill is not just mocking romance.
I decided to wear a band of red over my eyes,
And yet still I beat them all, to their surprise.

And so I left the place that I had called home,
To find a place find with adventure, to roam.
And came across did I a fiery fey,
Whom was so beautiful that I must say.

This creature of fire was in a terrible mess,
And when she saw me to her help she did stress,
For she had been captured and put in a trap,
Her wings of fire bound and extinguished by tree sap.

But the trap was more elaborate then that,
Cause below her was a boiling water vat,
Thinking sharper then my arrow tips,
I shot two arrows at the tree tops lips.

Secureling them fast with two ropes quite strong,
And with a great leap I swung down along,
Closer I swung to the flaming beauty sprite,
And snatched her up, from a fate not bright.

So grateful she was to be saved from her fate,
For she had feared that someone would be to late.
In thanks of my help she gifted me with her fire,
With magical boots and an enchanted bow worth desire.

She left with thanks and bid me well on my travels more,
And I waved her off while thinking of where next to explore,
Turning to leave, I fired an arrow from the gift,
To my surprise my arrow alit with fire swift.

Smiling to myself and taking off fast,
I noticed my feet now lit up the grass.
Off I set in search of a challenge to warrent,
For now had power to match my special talent.

Perhaps I could find what I search for so right,
In joining the Skylander's and defending with might.
Perhaps then I might find that challenge I seek,
And I blazed down the path, with fire at my feet.


HERE WE GO HUN!!!! ^_^ I hope you like it. ^_^ Sorry it took so long... I just COULDN'T think of what to do for Flameslinger... His past and personality was difficult to come up with a story... ^^;;

[graz73]

Great job there! I think you got the basic character idea... He's a show off, but cares about helping people too.

[hangarburger]

Could you do a poem about Gill Grunt's search for his mermaid girlfriend?

[hebejebe]

Can you do a Slam Bam poem.